1. nathan
liquor
gun/revolver
flask
television
shadow
handcuffs
photograph
fedora
radio
trench coat
blood stain
baby food
car
syringe
headlights
bullet
horn
umbrella
2. sophie
milk/milkman
matches
records
rain
briefcase
thunder
war
badge
lamp
leather
street lamp
pipe
magnifying glass
light bulb
smoke
dice
3. matt
money
tie
cash
sweat
phone book
red dress
refrigerator
fishnets
sewer
running faucet
toilet/sink
camera
moon
jail cell
scotch
ice cube
4. madelaine
bar
cigarette
watch
venetian blinds
sunglasses
lipstick/lipstick stain
telephone booth
gloves
notepad
zip lock bag
mirrors
cards
fog
diamonds
suit
It’s a trench coat handcuff
ReplyDeleteSyringing with a horn like a gun blast
Bullets umbrella the night sky
As the radio stains his shadow.
HAHAHAHA. you are genius nathan! btw: thanks madelaine!
ReplyDeleteAs the records scratched against
ReplyDeleteThe thunder and rain.
The fishnets and red dress badged a briefcase
Under the starry street lights
of shady downtown.
The leather stenched of cash and scotch
just like her.
Pipe smoked through the moonlight.
Night soaked her flesh.
(i used some of the words from the bottom half of the list.. if you guys all write & post something before i go to bed.. i can edit em all together so that it flows better. but i understand if yall don't want that. let me knowww)
Sunglasses watch her gloves dial
ReplyDeletethe telephone booth or
deal cards. Suits
and cigarettes fog up the bar. Mirrors
and diamonds blind that lipstick stain.
Sorry for the really late post. I'm gonna put them together in the way that I think makes most sense, because I was last. You can put it together your own way too if you think you have a god way to fit it together.
ReplyDeleteSmoke clouded the night air
dressing the streets grey
The moonlight reflected off his face
as sweat rained down
His nerves not calmed
by the scotch
He had swallowed
his pride at the bar
And now
His flask was empty.
does anybody have an idea for the title
ReplyDeleteI actually have no idea how to arrange these. I'll do it as well as I can, but if you have the time try to find a good way to put them together
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